Redrawn comics of frolics past for submission consideration 5/7

Once again, in case you can't tell the one on the left is our redone version. And the only reason I chose to redo this comic instead of just submitting it 'as is' is really because I wanted it to look better. Yet, while I type this I am realizing that it could very well be debatable. Above is one of my most well received comics to date and maybe tampering with it will cause some sort of space time flux...I don't know. I'm half awake and I woke up just to post this...what do you think? -chuckHarrison